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The line chart illustrates the information about salary method utilized in United state from 2014 to 2017 is depicted by the redared line graph.the data has been calibrated in the percentage.

The line chart illustrates the information about salary method utilized in United state from 2014 to 2017 is depicted by the redared line graph. the data has been calibrated in the percentage. 11NW7
From overall, it can be vividly manifested that the majority of masses utilised credit card and cash methods for payment techniques. nonetheless, the cheque as well as debit card way used by consumers minimum for payment. To begin with, in2014 the percentage of debit card nearly 15% was used by consumers for payment. whereas, cheque technique utilised merely25%. In the next year debit card noticed above twenty percent. however, in the followed year debit card procedure usage by consumers manifested that minor decline nearly 10%. While, credit card method used by about 30%. And in the last year debit and credit card were used by the consumers 15% and 30% respectively for gallery technique. moving further, in the initial period around 35% cheque method used by consumers. nevertheless, there had been a dramatic reduce noticed for sallery method used by human beings accounted for above25% in2015. then, in the next year it was similar almost quarter. Whereas, sharply rise up was seen in cheque technique it was exactly 35%. after that in the end of period the percentage increased sharply 30 and 35% respectively in both method
From
overall
, it can be
vividly
manifested that the majority of masses
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utilised
credit
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card
and cash
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methods
for payment
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techniques
.
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nonetheless
, the
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cheque
as well
as debit
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card
way
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used
by
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consumers
minimum for payment. To
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begin
with, in2014 the percentage of debit
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card
nearly
15% was
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used
by
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consumers
for payment.
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whereas
,
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cheque
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technique
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utilised
merely25%. In the
next
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year
debit
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card
noticed above twenty percent.
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however
, in the followed
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year
debit
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card
procedure usage by
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consumers
manifested that minor decline
nearly
10%.
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While
, credit
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card
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method
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used
by about 30%. And in the last
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year
debit and credit
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card
were
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used
by the
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consumers
15% and 30%
respectively
for gallery
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technique
.
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moving
further
, in the initial period around 35%
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cheque
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method
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used
by
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consumers
.
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nevertheless
, there had been a dramatic
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reduce
noticed for
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sallery
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method
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used
by human beings accounted for above25% in2015.
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then
, in the
next
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year
it was similar almost quarter.
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Whereas
,
sharply
rise up was
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seen
in
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cheque
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technique
it was exactly 35%.
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after
that in the
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end
of period the percentage increased
sharply
30 and 35%
respectively
in both
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method

IELTS academic The line chart illustrates the information about salary method utilized in United state from 2014 to 2017 is depicted by the redared line graph. the data has been calibrated in the percentage.

Academic
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1 paragraphs
186 words
5.0
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