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The map illustrates the present and proposed plan of Islip town centre.

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The map illustrates the present and proposed plan of Islip town centre. Overall, we can see a vast development. The town centre is surrounded by dual carriageway. Additionally, new housing areas will be erected in the future. At present the town centre has a main road in the north that runs from east to west. There are shops on both the sides of this road. The countryside is in the far north, whereas, the housing area is in the centre and towards the far south. There is school and park in the west and east side of houses which is well connected to the main road. The new plan of town, shows expansion in the North, completely removing countryside. The main road is now pedestrians way and shops on south of it remain unchanged while towards north will become bus station, shopping centre and car park. Although the park reduced in size its location along with school will not change. Residential area will be developed together with dual carriageway all around the town.
The map illustrates the present and proposed plan of
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Islip
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town
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centre
.

Overall
, we can
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see
a vast development. The
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town
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centre
is surrounded
by dual carriageway.
Additionally
, new housing areas will
be erected
in the future.

At present the
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town
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centre
has a main road in the
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north
that runs from east to west. There are shops on both the sides of this road. The countryside is in the far
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north
, whereas, the housing area is in the
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centre
and towards the far south. There is school and park in the west and east side of
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houses
which is
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well connected
to the main road.

The new plan of
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town
,
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shows
expansion in the
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North
, completely removing countryside. The main road is
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now
pedestrians way and shops on south of it remain unchanged while towards
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north
will become bus station, shopping
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centre
and car park.
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Although
the park
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reduced
in size its location along with school will not
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change
. Residential area will
be developed
together with dual carriageway all around the
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town
.

IELTS academic The map illustrates the present and proposed plan of Islip town centre.

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