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The map illustrates changes that took place in a village called Bode between 1995 and present.

The map illustrates changes that took place in a village called Bode between 1995 and present. BgxR6
The map illustrates changes that took place in a village called Bode between 1995 and present. Looking from an overall perspective, it is obviously apparent that the most striking feature is the disappearance of forest park, fishing port as well as fish market. In addition, it should be emphasized that agricultural area was replaced by golf and tennis courts. In top left corner, there are more houses built alongside main road compared a few ones in 1995. Furthermore, a new street was opend to the west of village, leading to more residents gathering along this street. In the northwest of map, farmland was transformed into a large golf and 2 tennis courts, which cater for inhabitants entertaining need. Besides, several trees in the forest park were chopped down to provide a wide space for this construction. The other outstanding change happening at the bottom of map was vanishing fishing port. This resulted in the disappearance of fish market closing to it and the erection of apartments to make away for higher population. Moreover, a row of shops near road running from west to east were converted into numerous restaurants. The addition of car park close to hotel was witnessed in corner of roads and café remained unchanged during period shown.
The map illustrates
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changes
that took place in a village called Bode between 1995 and present.

Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is
obviously
apparent that the most striking feature is the disappearance of forest park, fishing port
as well
as fish market.
In addition
, it should
be emphasized
that agricultural area
was replaced
by golf and tennis courts.

In top
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left
corner, there are more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
built alongside main road compared a few ones in 1995.
Furthermore
, a new street was
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opend
to the west of village, leading to more residents gathering along this street. In the northwest of map, farmland
was transformed
into a large golf and 2 tennis courts, which cater for inhabitants entertaining need.
Besides
, several trees in the forest park
were chopped
down to provide a wide space for this construction.

The other outstanding
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
happening at the bottom of map was vanishing fishing port. This resulted in the disappearance of fish market closing to it and the erection of apartments to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
away for higher population.
Moreover
, a row of shops near road running from west to east
were converted
into numerous restaurants. The addition of car park close to hotel
was witnessed
in corner of roads and café remained unchanged during period shown.

IELTS academic The map illustrates changes that took place in a village called Bode between 1995 and present.

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