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The map illustrates a place where had different parts in past, and nowadays connected with transports system.

The map illustrates a place where had different parts in past, and nowadays connected with transports system. VwAa7
The map illustrates a place where had different parts in past, and nowadays connected with transports system. Overall, Meadowside Village and Foton increased their land, in addition to that, they communicated, such as they are more populated now. Furthermore, places have more infrasturucture like transportation, buildings etc. In 1962, Fonton and Meanside were seperated without opportunities to live. After approximately 20 years, parts started increasing its lands, right that moment, it seems there is enlarging in both sides. Housing estates located west side of Meadow Village, and Superstore is south, Leasure Complex near the road. Three of them link with various transport. Currently, both sides connect each other, between two, there are Business Park where employees can rest, a modern Hotel for foreigner, and Train station which locals can use going to work with new railway to Fonton. The new style of city is more comfortable to reach, and overloaded because of fresh sky-scarpers of town.
The map illustrates a place where had
different
parts
in past
, and nowadays connected with transports system.

Overall
,
Meadowside
Village and
Foton
increased their land,
in addition
to that, they communicated, such as they are more populated
now
.
Furthermore
, places have more
infrasturucture
like transportation, buildings etc.

In 1962,
Fonton
and
Meanside
were
seperated
without opportunities to
live
. After approximately 20 years, parts
started
increasing its lands, right that moment, it seems there is enlarging in both sides. Housing estates located west side of Meadow Village, and Superstore is south,
Leasure
Complex near the road. Three of them link with various transport.

Currently
, both sides connect each other, between two, there are Business Park where employees can rest, a modern Hotel for foreigner, and Train station which locals can
use
going to work with new railway to
Fonton
. The new style of city is more comfortable to reach, and overloaded
because
of fresh sky-scarpers of town.
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IELTS academic The map illustrates a place where had different parts in past, and nowadays connected with transports system.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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