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the given chart shows the changes that taken place in Liverton Dock from 1980 to now.

the given chart shows the changes that taken place in Liverton Dock from 1980 to now. YwAYr
The reconstruction of Liverton Dock which take place between 1980 and in the present time is illustrated in the given pictorial chart. More specifically, there were two warehouses beside crane in the North side, which are replaced by two education Centre, a sailing club and kid's playing area. In addition, a warehouse and a crane were located in the South in 1980, while a hotel, two apartments and a parking lot is built on that place in the present time. Moving furthermore, a river walk is appeared on the brink of river as well as a bridge is introduced to both sides now. In contrast, a lot of ship could be seen in the past, whereas today a ship is converted into a museum. Also, there is a presence of flood barrier near bridge. Wrapping up, it is clearly seen that the Liverton Dock was used for the purpose of business but now many other building and facilities are added.
The reconstruction of
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Liverton
Dock which take place between 1980 and in the present time
is illustrated
in the
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given
pictorial chart.

More
specifically
, there were two warehouses beside crane in the North side, which
are replaced
by two education
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Centre
, a sailing club and kid's playing area.
In addition
, a warehouse and a crane
were located
in the South in 1980, while a hotel, two apartments and a parking lot
is built
on that place in the present time.

Moving
furthermore
, a river walk
is appeared
on the brink of river
as well
as a bridge
is introduced
to both sides
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.
In contrast
,
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a lot of ship
could be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in the past, whereas
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
a ship
is converted
into a museum.
Also
, there is a presence of flood barrier near bridge.

Wrapping up, it is
clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Liverton
Dock was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for the purpose of business
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but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
other building and facilities are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
.
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