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the map has change and decrible it change

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The given maps display the changes between 2009 and 2014 of the waterfront area of a town called Darwin. In two maps, there are some big changes such as: more residental areas, new university, harbour, … And the industrial area was replaced by the park with a lot of trees, … In 2009, in the center of the area next to the lake, there was an industrial area but it has replaced in 2014 by a swimming pool. The another area of industry in 2014 has been turned into the park for the entertainment purpose, also there are double residental area in 2014. The resident is clear with the park too. The second change is about the transport sytems. Because in 2009, there only some road in this area but in 2014, they have built a harbour in the sea for the ship want to appoarch this town. Overall, in 5 years, the waterfront area has changes a lots and the changes make the town mordern day by day.
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between 2009 and 2014 of the waterfront
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of a town called Darwin. In two maps, there are
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some
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big
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changes
such as: more
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residental
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, new university,
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harbour
, … And the industrial
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was replaced
by the park with
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trees, …

In 2009, in the center of the
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next
to the lake, there was an industrial
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it has replaced in 2014 by a swimming pool. The another
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of industry in 2014 has
been turned
into the park for the entertainment purpose,
also
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residental
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in 2014. The resident is
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with the park too.

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The
second
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is about the transport
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.
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in 2009, there
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road in this
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but
in 2014, they have built a
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harbour
in the sea for the ship want to
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this town.

Overall
, in 5 years, the waterfront
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has
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a lots and the
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the town
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mordern
day by day.
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IELTS academic the map has change and decrible it change

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6.0
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