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The map show the changes in Park from 1980 to present

The map show the changes in Park from 1980 to present 0E8YQ

The rendered map depicts the changes of a park between 1980 and now it can be seen that few similarities but many difference between two layouts. It is menifest from the chart that in 1980 the trees were planted in the north-east corner of the park but at present there are many picnic chairs as well as desks and Barbecue trees moreover in the corner of south-east there were flowers which replaced by playground. Pratham O the more I catching feature is found and beach they are still at the same position as they were in 1983 however the road was late down from the best to south in past but now it divide the whole park in 24 sections last but not least the area of Southwest there were a lot of flowers but at present it convert into Bush. Overall, the significant change can be seen in Road on other hand the pound and beach have no change.

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