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The map depicts two pictures of a public park: the first image of the park is from 1928, and the second one is of recent time.

The map depicts two pictures of a public park: the first image of the park is from 1928, and the second one is of recent time. kg1g8

Overall, in the place of fountains and music stage, a new rose garden and a huge amphitheater are made, and a coffee hub along with a children's play area is also new construction in the park. in detail, the fountain and small music stage for artists used to be the main attraction of the park during 1920. However, now both places are changed: the music stage is made into a big concert hall at the west of the park and the fountain in the center of the park is replaced by a square rose garden, and seats are available for visitors to sit around the garden. Furthermore, in 1920, there used to be a rose garden and a pond particularly for water plants at the northeast corner, which is now constructed into a play area for children, plus a cafe is built right next to the play area, in place of the rose garden. in addition, the southeastern part glasshouse is now a water feature

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