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Many people do shopping online . What are the reason. How does affected the socities and local shops . What are the positive and negative effect.

Many people do shopping online. What are the reason. How does affected the socities and local shops. What are the positive and negative effect. Q5xlb

A large number of individual do online shopping. There are various reasons associated with it and it impacts the society and local shops postively as well as negatively. Both the aspects will be explained in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with the reason of doing online shopping by the individuals, the major one is busy schedule of masses. Today people are busy their jobs and houshold chores. So, they have no time for offline shopping. To illustrate, a survey was conducted by BBC news, they observed that 85% people prefer online shopping as they have busy schedule. A long with this, online shopping is convinient for masses. They can easily purchase something from their home. Sometimes, they can buy things on discount. It has both postive and negative effects on societies and local shops. Online shopping has some negative impacts on shops because the sales decrease and it is not good for shopkeepers. However, it has a postive effect on communities. As number of choices are available in products. They can save their time and buy things on discount so, they save their money. In conclusion, busy schedule and convenience are the main causes of preferring online shopping by the individuals which has both benefits and drawbacks for them, however, it influences the local vendors in negative way.

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A large number of
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online
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shopping
. There are various reasons associated with it and it impacts the society and local shops Possible spelling mistake found.positively
postively
as well
 as negatively
. Both the aspects will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpreted
explained
 in upcoming paragraphs.

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online
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shopping
 by the individuals, the major one is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactiveunavailableworking
busy
 schedule of masses. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
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people
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busy
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houshold
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So
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shopping
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people
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online
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shopping
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busy
 schedule. A long with this, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
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shopping
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convinient
 for masses. They can easily
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purchase
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Sometimes
, they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 things on discount.

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postive
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 effects on societies and local shops. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
Online
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shopping
 has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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negative
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because
 the sales decrease and it is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for shopkeepers. However
, it has a Possible spelling mistake found.positivepostie
postive
 effect on communities. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 number of choices are available in products. They can save their time and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 things on discount This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, they save their money.

In conclusion
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactiveunavailableworking
busy
 schedule and convenience are the main causes of preferring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 by the individuals which has both benefits and drawbacks for them, however
, it influences the local vendors in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 way. 