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How sugar canes is produced

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The diagram depicts the production steps of sugar from a sugar cane plant. From an overall perspective, it is a seven-stage process, starting at how long sugar cane takes to grow, followed by harvesting, and finally, the product is dried and cooled to get fine, white sugar. Firstly, the sugar cane plants take around 1 a year or 1. 5 years to grow. There are two ways of Harvesting the mature plants in the second stage one is by machine and another is by human before grinding the harvested sugar canes to get sugar cane juice by using a crushing machine. In the fourth step, the sugar cane juice came out from the machine is then purified by using a limestone filter. The resulting purified juice from the filter is then evaporated by using a heated steamer to form syrup from liquid juice. Then, in the sixth stage, the centrifuge is used to separate crystals of sugar from syrup. Finally, the outcome sugar crystals are put in a vessel to dry and cool for getting the fine, white sugar.

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