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The map depicts the development of the village of Ryemouth from 1995 to the present.

The map depicts the development of the village of Ryemouth from 1995 to the present. NyNQ0
The map depicts the development of the village of Ryemouth from 1995 to the present. Overall, it can be easily observed that Ryemouth village has undergone a dramatic change. The village of Ryemouth has urbanized and become more modern compared to the initial year. In 1995, there are many households, which were situated in the north west and the west of the map. Moreover, a road had been built in the middle of Ryemouth village, which was connected to another road in the south of the map. Subsequently, people had constructed a farm and a forest park, which were located in the north west. In the south of the map, there were many different amenities, in the east of the village of Ryemouth, there was a hotel, which was opposite to a cafe shop. Besides, a shop and a fish market had been erected in the south west of the maps, which was near to fishing port at the south. At present, the village of Ryemouth is getting more urbanized. The residential area in the north east has been increased significantly. Besides, a road has been extended to the east of the map as well. Furthermore, the farmland and forest park in the north east have been demolished to make room for sports, which are tennis and golf. Exceptionally, a car park has been constructed on the east of the hotel. Next, shop and fish market have been replaced by restaurant and apartments. In terms of fishing port, it has been knocked down.
The
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Ryemouth
from 1995 to the present.

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, it can be
easily
observed that
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Ryemouth
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village
has undergone a dramatic
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change
. The
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village
of
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Ryemouth
has urbanized and become more modern compared to the initial year.

In 1995, there are
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many
households, which
were situated
in the
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north west
and the west of the
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map
.
Moreover
, a road had
been built
in the middle of
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Ryemouth
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village
, which
was connected
to another road in the south of the
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map
.
Subsequently
,
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people
had constructed a farm and a forest park, which
were located
in the
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north west
. In the south of the
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map
, there were
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many
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different
amenities, in the east of the
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village
of
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Ryemouth
, there was a hotel, which was opposite to a
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cafe
shop.
Besides
, a shop and a fish market had
been erected
in the
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
south west
of the
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maps
, which was near to fishing port at the south.

At present, the
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of
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Ryemouth
is getting more urbanized. The residential area in the
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north east
has
been increased
significantly
.
Besides
, a road has
been extended
to the east of the
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map
as well
.
Furthermore
, the farmland and forest park in the
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north east
have
been demolished
to
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make
room for sports, which are tennis and golf.
Exceptionally
, a car park has
been constructed
on the east of the hotel.
Next
, shop and fish market have
been replaced
by restaurant and apartments. In terms of fishing port, it has
been knocked
down.

IELTS academic The map depicts the development of the village of Ryemouth from 1995 to the present.

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