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The chart below shows multi-year expenses in the same nation on five different items in 2010 and 2014.

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The given bar graph gives information about spend money on five different thing namely food, clothes, books Smartphones and toiletries in the same country in 2010 and 2014. The data has been calibreated in million dollars. overall, it can be clearly seen that the food was spent the most in both the year, while the books were the lowest spent item among all the categories. Aound 3700 million dollars was expand in food item in 2010, where as nearly 4400 million dollars was expand in same category in 2014. The same country was spend on smartphones which is 2000million dollars and 320million dollars respectively in the year 2010 and 2014 respectively. The most striking feature of the bar graph is that 2500 million dollars expand in the clothes in the both different year in the same nation. In 2010, 1000million dollars and 1950million dollars was spent on books and toiletries respectively, while 500million dollars and 2000million dollars was expand on books and toiletries in 2014.
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bar graph gives information about spend money on five
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food, clothes,
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books
Smartphones and toiletries in the same country in 2010 and 2014. The data has been
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million
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overall
, it can be
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that the food
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the most in both the year, while the
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were the lowest spent item among all the categories.

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Aound
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million
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dollars
was
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in food item in 2010,
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where as
nearly
4400
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million
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dollars
was
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in same category in 2014. The same country was
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spend
on smartphones which is
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2000million
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dollars
and
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320million
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dollars
respectively
in the year 2010 and 2014
respectively
.

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million
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dollars
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expand
in the clothes in the both
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different
year in the same nation. In 2010,
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1000million
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dollars
and
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1950million
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dollars
was spent
on
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books
and toiletries
respectively
, while
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500million
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dollars
and
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2000million
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was
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books
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IELTS academic The chart below shows multi-year expenses in the same nation on five different items in 2010 and 2014.

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