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The map depicts floor plan of Islip town center in the recent time and a future proposed plan for the future with new developments and facilities.

The map depicts floor plan of Islip town center in the recent time and a future proposed plan for the future with new developments and facilities. Q8y01
The map depicts floor plan of Islip town center in the recent time and a future proposed plan for the future with new developments and facilities. Overall, the country side will experience several changes, whereas, the main road will be constructed around the town by enclaving the town in the center. The most of the development are to the country side as per the new proposed plan. Shops to the north will be converted to Bus station, sports center, car parking whereas the shops to the south will be maintained as such. Apart from these features a new housing area will be included for the town. These are the main changes to the north side of the town Looking at the southern side, town will have a new housing area meanwhile, the existing park, housing are and the school will be untouched. The main road passing through the center will be converted to a dual carriage way which will splits into two parts, travelers will have to go around the town instead of going throng the center. The main road at the present will be converted into a pedestrian walk way in future.
The map depicts floor plan of
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Islip
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town
center in the recent time and a future proposed plan for the future with
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new
developments and facilities.
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changes
, whereas, the
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main
road will
be constructed
around the
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town
by
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enclaving
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town
in the center.

The most of the development are to the country side as per the
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new
proposed plan. Shops to the north will
be converted
to Bus station, sports center, car parking whereas the shops to the south will
be maintained
as such. Apart from these features a
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new
housing area will
be included
for the
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town
. These are the
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main
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changes
to the north side of the
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town


Looking at the southern side,
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town
will have a
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new
housing area meanwhile, the existing park, housing are and the school will
be untouched
. The
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main
road passing through the center will
be converted
to a dual carriage way which will splits into two parts, travelers will
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have to
go around the
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town
instead
of going throng the center. The
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main
road at the present will
be converted
into a pedestrian walk way
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in future
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IELTS academic The map depicts floor plan of Islip town center in the recent time and a future proposed plan for the future with new developments and facilities.

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