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The map compares and contrasts the current home and its plans for future.

The map compares and contrasts the current home and its plans for future. WEMQ0
Overall, it can be seen that many changes occurred between the current home and future plans for home. To begin with, in house there are garden in its north direction as well as its behind there are living room, the bathroom is situated centre of the house in west side. In the southwest corner there are main entrance and front there are main hall also in home there are three study bedrooms located one northwest corner and other its opposite side and south corner. kitchen is situated in southeast direction. On the other hand, many changes occurred for house plans. The main entrance and garden will be remained at same places. The size of the hall will be reduced and new ensuite bathroom and parking would be added in home. The number of study bedroom will be increased as compared to past northwest study bedroom divided into two study bedroom whereas living room would be replaced by study bedroom other two study bedroom situated in north and south side. The social area will be added with kitchen. The new parking area will be constructed in south and living room will be located far side from home in future plans.
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that
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occurred between the
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home and future plans for home. To
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with, in
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there are garden in its north direction
as well
as its behind there are living room, the bathroom
is situated
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centre
of the
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house
in west side. In the southwest corner there are main entrance and front there are main
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hall
also
in home there are three
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study
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bedrooms
located one northwest corner and other its opposite side and south corner.
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kitchen
is situated
in southeast direction.
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,
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many
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changes
occurred for
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house
plans. The main entrance and garden will
be remained
at same places. The size of the hall will be
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reduced
and new
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ensuite
bathroom and parking would be
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added
in home.
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The
number of
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study
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bedroom
will
be increased
as compared to past northwest
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study
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bedroom
divided into two
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study
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bedroom
whereas living room would
be replaced
by
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bedroom
other two
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study
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bedroom
situated in north and south side.
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The
social area will be
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added
with kitchen.
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The
new parking area will
be constructed
in south and living room will
be located
far side from home in future plans.
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IELTS academic The map compares and contrasts the current home and its plans for future.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
199 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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