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The line graph below shows the production of paper wood Pulp and sawn wood in the UK from 98 to

The line graph below shows the production of paper wood Pulp and sawn wood in the UK from 98 to mLmQO
Production of Paper wood Pulp, Wood pulp and Sawn-wood in the United kingdom from 1980 to 2000 is depicted by line chart. In the beginning of the provided chart, manufacturing rate of paper and packaging was highest among the all of these with the approximately 230 million tonnes, then it rose quickly after 1990 and by this year 250 million tonnes of paper were produced then this production dramatically increased and it leveled off at 350 million tonnes in 2000, afterwards, there was difference of about 30 million tonnes in the manufacturing of wood Pulp and sawn-wood. Moving further, it had experience that in 1998 the production of both Sawn- wood and Wood pulp intersect at 150 million tonnes then both followed the same trend as 1980 to 1990, however there was a decreasing trend in 2000 and both were ending at near about 190 and 150 million tonnes. Overall paper and packaging production followed an upward trend, whereas somehow trend was of manufacturing of Wood Pulp and Sawn-wood was same with some fluctuations in opposite after a specific time period.
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Pulp,
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pulp and Sawn-wood in the
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United kingdom
from 1980 to 2000
is depicted
by line chart.

In the beginning of the provided chart, manufacturing rate of paper and packaging was highest among the all of these with the approximately 230
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million
tonnes, then it rose
quickly
after 1990 and by this year 250
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million
tonnes of paper
were produced
then this
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production
dramatically
increased and it leveled off at 350
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million
tonnes in 2000, afterwards, there was difference of about 30
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million
tonnes in the manufacturing of
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wood
Pulp and sawn-wood.

Moving
further
, it had experience that in 1998 the
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production
of both Sawn-
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wood
and
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Wood
pulp intersect at 150
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million
tonnes then both followed the same
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trend
as 1980 to 1990,
however
there was a decreasing
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trend
in 2000 and both were ending at near about 190 and 150
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million
tonnes.

Overall
paper and packaging
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production
followed an upward
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trend
, whereas somehow
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trend
was of manufacturing of
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Wood
Pulp and Sawn-wood was same with
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fluctuations in opposite after a specific time period.
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