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The bar graph shows the expenditure on health and education in UAE in the years 1985,1990,1993. Write a summary of the expenditure describing the information in 150 words

The bar graph shows the expenditure on health and education in UAE in the years 1985, 1990, 1993. Write a summary of the expenditure describing the information in 150 words wKqol

The bar graph illustrates the money spent on health and education in UAE for three years. As an overview, the expenditure on education was at peak in the year 1993 however, it was the least for health in 1990. In terms of education, there was an increasing trend. In 1985, 10% of the total amount was used for educating people which further raised to exactly 14% in 1990. There was a slight increase of about 1% in 1993 ( 15% ). On the other hand, the amount paid to the health sector showed a fluctuation in the rates. For instance, in 1990, about 7% was spent where as for the two years 1985 and 1993, the expenditure was 7. 9% and exactly 10% respectively. The graph depicts that huge amount was spent on education than on health.

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health
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
A determiner is probably missing here: "in the UAE".in the UAE
in UAE
 for three years.

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education
 was at peak in the year 1993 however
, it was the least for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenergystrengthwell-beingfitness
health
 in 1990.

In terms of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
, there was an increasing trend. In 1985, 10% of the total amount was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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people
 which further
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.

On the other hand
, the amount paid to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenergystrengthwell-beingfitness
health
 sector This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 a fluctuation in the rates. For instance
, in 1990, about 7% was spent
Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
 for the two years 1985 and 1993, the expenditure was 7. 9% and exactly 10% respectively
. The graph depicts that huge amount was spent
 on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 than on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withenergystrengthwell-beingfitness
health
. 