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The map below shows two proposed sites foe a new adventure company in the Caribbean. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows two proposed sites foe a new adventure company in the Caribbean. BJLdd
This map depicts about the planning to establish the new adventure company on the Caribbean island by having two site to choose from. Except for the important places, it also shows about animal habitats, waterways, and roads. Site one locates on the west of the island and near the ocean. Above of S1, there is the biggest town in this island, George Town. Base and Airport place not so far from S1, in the south of the area. There are also roads and waterways locate near the site. It seems this location lives among the importance and the most advancement zone of this island. Site two place on the almost center of this island. There also have road and waterway through, however, There has not crucial settlement live near beside Two Boats Village. Nevertheless, its places among the animal habitats as well as near the peak more than S1. Overall, each site has own benefit, S1 live nearly the big settlement and the airport, and S2 seems to locate among the nature than S1. Therefore, the adventure company should decide from this information that where is proper to establish their company.
This map depicts about the planning to establish the new adventure
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company
on the Caribbean
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island
by having two
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site
to choose from.
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Except for
the
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important
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places
, it
also
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shows
about animal habitats, waterways, and roads.

Site one locates on the west of the
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island
and
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near
the ocean. Above of S1, there is the biggest town in this
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island
, George Town. Base and Airport
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place
not
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so
far from S1, in the south of the area. There are
also
roads and waterways locate
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near
the site. It seems this location
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lives
among the importance and the most advancement zone of this island.

Site two
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place
on the almost center of this
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island
. There
also
have road and waterway through,
however
, There has not crucial settlement
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live
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near
beside Two Boats Village.
Nevertheless
, its
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places
among the animal habitats
as well
as
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near
the peak more than S1.

Overall
, each site has
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own
benefit, S1
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live
nearly
the
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big
settlement and the airport, and S2 seems to locate among the nature than S1.
Therefore
, the adventure
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company
should decide from this information that where is proper to establish their
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company
.
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IELTS academic The map below shows two proposed sites foe a new adventure company in the Caribbean.

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