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The chart outlines how frequently the individuals in USA feasted in quick nourishment eateries between 2003 and 2013

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The chart outlines how frequently the individuals in USA feasted in quick nourishment eateries between 2003 and 2013 in terms of percentage of individuals and diverse frequencies of eating like each day, once a week, a few times a week, once or twice a month, few times a year and never. To start, in 2003, the greatest number of individuals that's 31% and the least that's 4 % consumed quick nourishment once a week and everyday respectively. There's a comparative trend in 2006. Around 33% and 3% ate quick nourishment once a week and regular respectively. 33% devoured quick nourishment once or twice a month in 2013. same number of individuals have eaten quick nourishment each day in 2006 and 2013. The number of individuals who never ate quick nourishment was the highest in 2003 that accounted for 5%. 3% never ate quick nourishment in 2006 and 2013. The number of individuals who ate quick nourishment few times in a year in 2006 and 2013 were the same.
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eateries between 2003 and 2013 in terms of percentage of
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each day in 2006 and 2013. The
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was the highest in 2003 that accounted for 5%. 3% never
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in 2006 and 2013. The
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few times in a year in 2006 and 2013 were the same.
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IELTS academic The chart outlines how frequently the individuals in USA feasted in quick nourishment eateries between 2003 and 2013

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