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The given process chart shows the production of wool for personal and industrial use.

The given process chart shows the production of wool for personal and industrial use. Vr7Em

The rendered process chart illustrates the production of wool for personal and industrial consumption. There are 11 stages begins with getting sheep and culminating with the production of jacket and carpet. On scrutinizing the process chart it is witnessed that firstly, shearing sof sheep body take place after that, cleaning of extracted shear done. After the completion of drying process it is send to industries for spinning then, string making starts. Following in, when strings are made afterwards, tufts are store in particular place then, the spinning balls of yarn converted into knitting process. Finally, after this jacket and carpet is ready for consumer use and sale in market.

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 chart illustrates the production of wool for personal and industrial consumption. There are 11 stages This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
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 with getting sheep and culminating with the production of jacket and carpet.

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 chart it is witnessed
 that firstly
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 to industries for spinning then, string making This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
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Following in, when strings are made
 afterwards, tufts are store in particular
 place then, the spinning balls of yarn converted into knitting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
. Finally
, after this jacket and carpet is ready for consumer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 and sale in market. 