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The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given map gives information about the three locations that are under consideration for an amusement center. Overall, we can clearly see that location A is on the East of the map as opposed to location C to the West. On the other hand, it can be seen that location B is in the middle. In terms of location A which is on the East bank of the river is next to an industrial factory. This proves that this area is highly contaminated with chemical waste and exhausted fumes. Similarly, location B is also on the East side of the river but at the end of it. Furthermore, there are tall building blocks and roads that are located near that area. We can see that if the center is built here, the local people will have effortless access to it. As location C is concerned, it is located on the West side of the map which has a big forest in front of it. Also, location C is on a mountain that is on higher ground than the two remained areas.
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that are under consideration for an amusement center.

Overall
, we can
clearly
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see
that
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location
A is on the East of the map as opposed to
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location
C to the West.
On the other hand
, it can be
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seen
that
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location
B is in the middle.

In terms of
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A which is on the East bank of the river is
next
to an industrial factory. This proves that this area is
highly
contaminated with chemical waste and exhausted fumes.
Similarly
,
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location
B is
also
on the East side of the river
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but
at the
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end
of it.
Furthermore
, there are tall building blocks and roads that
are located
near that area. We can
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see
that if the center
is built
here, the local
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people
will have effortless access to it.

As
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location
C
is concerned
, it
is located
on the West side of the map which has a
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big
forest in front of it.
Also
,
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location
C is on a mountain
that is
on higher ground than the two remained areas.

IELTS academic The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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