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The charts show the amount and quality of water supplied to two regions of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The two bar charts illustrate the percentage of water distributed to the people and degree of its purity in Australia and Southeast Asia from 1990 to 2010. Overall, in both the years, Australia delivered water in higher proportion to its individuals and a much purer form but Southeast Asia slightly reduces its quality level later. Let’s talk about Australia, in 1990, about 80% of people were supplied with water and after 20 years it increased substantially almost by 100%. Furthermore, there was a slight increase in the level of purity of water between 1990 to 2010 from 70% to a little above 80%. Moving to Southeast Asia, in 1990, only about 38% of water is provided to the inhabitants and then after in 2010 about 78% of persons being provided with water. Moreover, Southeast Asia experienced a small decrease in their quality of water between 1990 to 2010 from 40% to 38%.
The two bar charts illustrate the percentage of
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and degree of its purity in Australia and Southeast Asia from 1990 to 2010.

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, in both the years, Australia delivered
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in higher proportion to its individuals and a much purer
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form
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Southeast Asia
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reduces
its quality level later.

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’s talk about Australia, in 1990, about 80% of
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people
were supplied
with
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and after 20 years it increased
substantially
almost by 100%.
Furthermore
, there was a slight increase in the level of purity of
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between 1990 to 2010
from 70% to a
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little
above 80%.

Moving to Southeast Asia, in 1990,
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only
about 38% of
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water
is provided
to the inhabitants and then after in 2010 about 78% of persons
being provided
with
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water
.
Moreover
, Southeast Asia experienced a
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small
decrease in their quality of
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between 1990 to 2010
from 40% to 38%.
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IELTS academic The charts show the amount and quality of water supplied to two regions of the world.

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6.0
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