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The given table represent us with information regarding water dedication for three principle uses in six Persian Gulf countries in 2000.

The given table represent us with information regarding water dedication for three principle uses in six Persian Gulf countries in 2000. Overall, it is evident that while all the countries appropriated of water predominantly for farming purposes, only a small ratio was allocated in industry. A closer look at the table that Saudi Arabia allotted a hefty 85% of water to farming pursued by Oman with only 2% lower. UEA (65%) and Qatar (62%) utilized a medium level of water usage with almost 20% lower than the top two nations. Moreover, Kuwait consumed the lowest fraction of water (19%) in agriculture while Bahrain having almost twice as this much. Turning to domestic consumptions, the biggest water user was Kuwait (63%) with Bahrain coming second with only 10% lower. UAE and Qatar’s amount of usage were 35% and 30% respectively. Saudi Arabia (13. 5%) and Oman (11%) made use of water in the least. All six nations had negligible investment of water in industry, all blow a tenth, with the exception of Kuwait which was 18%.
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dedication for three
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uses
in six Persian Gulf countries in 2000.

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, it is evident that while all the countries appropriated of
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water
predominantly
for farming purposes,
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ratio
was allocated
in industry.

A closer look at the table that Saudi Arabia allotted a hefty 85% of
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water
to farming pursued by Oman with
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only
2% lower.
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UEA
(65%) and Qatar (62%) utilized a medium level of
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usage with almost 20% lower than the top two nations.
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, Kuwait consumed the lowest fraction of
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water
(19%) in agriculture while Bahrain having almost twice as this much.

Turning to domestic
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consumptions
, the biggest
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user was Kuwait (63%) with Bahrain coming second with
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only
10% lower. UAE and Qatar’s amount of usage were 35% and 30%
respectively
. Saudi Arabia (13. 5%) and Oman (11%) made
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of
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in the least. All six nations had negligible investment of
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in industry, all blow a tenth,
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Kuwait which was 18%.
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IELTS academic The given table represent us with information regarding water dedication for three principle uses in six Persian Gulf countries in 2000.

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