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The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given shows us about the three possible locations for a leisure centre. The first centre is an industrial factory, it is located far from the other two locations. It is main place causing pollution for the environment. It has two factors affecting the environment. The first one is releasing smoke which causes lot of impact in the atmosphere and leads to air pollution. The second major factor, it located next to thr river leads to releasing toxic subtances and affects the marine life. The second centre is town located between the other two centres. A place for people surrounded with trees, not very busy place and to live peacefully. The third centre is a forest, a place for animals to live and it is connected with a lake near by.
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shows
us about the three possible locations for a leisure
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centre
. The
first
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centre
is an industrial factory, it
is located
far from the other two locations. It is main
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place
causing pollution for the environment. It has two factors affecting the environment. The
first
one is releasing smoke which causes
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lot of
impact in the atmosphere and leads to air pollution. The second major factor, it located
next
to
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thr
river leads to releasing toxic
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subtances
and affects the marine life. The second
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centre
is town located between the other two
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centres
. A
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place
for
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people
surrounded with trees, not
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very
busy
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place
and to
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live
peacefully
. The third
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centre
is a forest, a
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place
for animals to
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live and
it
is connected
with a lake
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near by
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IELTS academic The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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