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The map below shows the university sports courts in 1990 or in present time

The map below shows the university sports courts in 1990 or in present time 2RN0o
The pictorial representation show information about the different changes and improvement that happened in the university sports courts in 1990 and now. In overall, there are alot of changes done in the sport Court of university. In present time every thing changed from their place but cafe and reception are on same place in both time. After analyzing it can be clearly seen that, in the year of 1990 there was park in north west direction which converted into basketball court in present. In the downward side car parking is available for in sports university in 1990 which in present changed into big tennis courts. Moreover, cafe and reception in the front of outdoor pool which was on same place in both period. The diagram further collate that, in the university sports courts in 1990 there was outdoor pool in the North east direction which nowadays refurbished into indoor pool and same side there was changing room which demolished from its position in present. In the east south side there was only tennis court in 1990 and there was no other things available in past time. But in present time, in downwards side changing room is inaugurated and in the same side fitness centre and tennis courts reconstructed in that place.
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every thing
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cafe
and reception are on same
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place
in both
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. After analyzing it can be
clearly
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that, in the year of 1990 there was park in
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north west
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present
. In the downward
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side car
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sports
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university
in 1990 which in
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courts
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and reception in the front of outdoor pool which was on same
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further
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university
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sports
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courts
in 1990 there was outdoor pool in the North east direction which nowadays refurbished into indoor pool and same side there was changing room which demolished from its position in
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present
. In the east south side there was
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tennis
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, in downwards side changing room
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and in the same side fitness
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centre
and tennis
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courts
reconstructed in that
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IELTS academic The map below shows the university sports courts in 1990 or in present time

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