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The line chart illustrates the number of viewers watching news shows on Channel One at four different times of the day from January to December.

The line chart illustrates the number of viewers watching news shows on Channel One at four different times of the day from January to December. Mra9N
The line chart illustrates the number of viewers watching news shows on Channel One at four different times of the day from January to December. Overall, the most popular time of the day for news viewing is at 6 p. m, while it has the least viewers at 1 p. m. There are about 5 million viewers who watch the news at 6 p. m in the first month of the year. Then, the listeners of the 6 p. m news are less and less during the year, this news’ period has the least watcher with only more than 3 million in November. The next time of the day, 9: 30 p. m news shows see the upward trend and reach the peak with 4 million people watching the news in May. After that, there is a sharp decrease in this category, and in August, the 9: 30 news’ broadcast have only 1 million listeners. On the other hand, the people who watch the 1 p. m news seems remain stable with more than 1 million. Lastly, the 11 p. m is first broadcasted in the fifth month of the year, May, with a few people watching it. In three months since the first news is live, there are more 3 million people who enjoy the 11 p. m news.
The line chart illustrates the number of viewers watching
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times of the day from January to December.

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viewing is at 6 p. m, while it has the least viewers at 1 p. m.

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viewers who
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at 6 p. m in the
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are less and less during the year, this
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period has the least watcher with
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more than 3
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in November. The
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time of the day, 9: 30 p. m
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the upward trend and reach the peak with 4
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watching the
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in May. After that, there is a sharp decrease in this category, and in August, the 9: 30
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broadcast have
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1
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the 1 p. m
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watching it. In three months since the
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is
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, there are more 3
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IELTS academic The line chart illustrates the number of viewers watching news shows on Channel One at four different times of the day from January to December.

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