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The graph reveals that number of various type of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012. The population are given in numericls. Overall, since 1980 to 2012 olive Ridley Turtles had most popultion in all over India and Leatherback Turtles had least number of population. population of Green turtles and All species had been steady during the period of 1980 to 2012. to initiate with, Olive Ridley Turtles population had been grown till the year 1997 for about 140 number and after that it had been fluctuating throughout the period of 1998 to 2012. The number of Green Turtles fell slightly 100 to 90 all over the period of 1980 to 2012. In addition, the Leatherback Turtles population had been surge a little about 100 to 110 in 8 years. However, it drastically fell down to 60 number till the final year. Moreover, All species score had been 100 in 1980 and fluctuating for 32 years. however, it climb a little at the final year.
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IELTS academic some people claim that children should be punished for their mistake

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165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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