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The provided diagram gives information about the stages which are used to produce bricks for the industrial buildings. overall, it is immediately apparent that there are seven levels to manufacture bricks and then send them to market

The provided diagram gives information about the stages which are used to produce bricks for the industrial buildings. overall, it is immediately apparent that there are seven levels to manufacture bricks and then send them to market Aw623
At first, the digger starts to dig clay soil, and then the rough particle is taken apart through a metal grid that falls on the roller. In the following stage, there are two ways for shaping brick it includes using the wire cutter or mold. In the fourth stage, bricks are dried by the drying oven that is taken place between 24 and 48 hours. Afterward, it tolerates moderate or high heat in clay, they are from 200 to 98 or 870 to 1300 Celsius degrees, and they become chilly in the cooling chamber during 48 to 72 hours at the end of this level. Consequently, it sends to package in the factory. In the end, it delivers to market for constructing industrial buildings
At
first
, the digger
starts
to dig clay soil, and then the rough particle
is taken
apart through a metal grid that falls on the roller. In the following stage, there are two ways for shaping brick it includes using the wire cutter or mold. In the fourth stage, bricks
are dried
by the drying oven that
is taken
place between 24 and 48 hours. Afterward, it tolerates moderate or high heat in clay, they are from 200 to 98 or 870 to 1300 Celsius degrees, and they become chilly in the cooling chamber during 48 to 72 hours at the
end
of this level.
Consequently
, it
sends
to package in the factory. In the
end
, it delivers to market for constructing industrial
buildings
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IELTS academic The provided diagram gives information about the stages which are used to produce bricks for the industrial buildings. overall, it is immediately apparent that there are seven levels to manufacture bricks and then send them to market

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  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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