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The provided diagram gives information about the stages which are used to produce bricks for the industrial buildings. overall, it is immediately apparent that there are seven levels to manufacture bricks and then send them to market

The provided diagram gives information about the stages which are used to produce bricks for the industrial buildings. overall, it is immediately apparent that there are seven levels to manufacture bricks and then send them to market Aw623

At first, the digger starts to dig clay soil, and then the rough particle is taken apart through a metal grid that falls on the roller. In the following stage, there are two ways for shaping brick it includes using the wire cutter or mold. In the fourth stage, bricks are dried by the drying oven that is taken place between 24 and 48 hours. Afterward, it tolerates moderate or high heat in clay, they are from 200 to 98 or 870 to 1300 Celsius degrees, and they become chilly in the cooling chamber during 48 to 72 hours at the end of this level. Consequently, it sends to package in the factory. In the end, it delivers to market for constructing industrial buildings

At first
, the digger This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 to dig clay soil, and then the rough particle is taken
 apart through a metal grid that falls on the roller. In the following stage, there are two ways for shaping brick it includes using the wire cutter or mold. In the fourth stage, bricks are dried
 by the drying oven that is taken
 place between 24 and 48 hours. Afterward, it tolerates moderate or high heat in clay, they are from 200 to 98 or 870 to 1300 Celsius degrees, and they become chilly in the cooling chamber during 48 to 72 hours at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this level. Consequently
, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmits
sends
 to package in the factory. In the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
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IELTS academic The provided diagram gives information about the stages which are used to produce bricks for the industrial buildings. overall, it is immediately apparent that there are seven levels to manufacture bricks and then send them to market

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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