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The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. 0OY1
The bar chart shows the percentile contribution of 5 different industries to the economy of Brazil over a period of 2009 to 2019 along with predictions for 2029. From the bar chart it can be seen that the Finance sector is showing an upward trend over a period of one decade and will continue the same trend in future. Whereas the manufacturing sector has shown a downward trend when compared to past 10 years and will continue the declining trend in future. While other industries like food processing, Tourism and oil and gas have shown a fluctuating trend. In the year 2009 finance industry was the highest contributor to Brazil’s economy with almost 32% contributions, while food processing industry was the least contributor with roughly 10% contribution. Manufacturing industries were the second lowest contributor with almost 20% while tourism and oil and gas contributed almost a quarter each to the economy of Brazil. Continuing with its increasing trend in 2019 finance reached a mark of around 37% while still being the highest contributor to the economy of Brazil. Followed by it is the food processing industry with almost 10% increase in its contribution and nearing a 20% mark. Oil and gas industry had a slight increase of 5% and touched around 30% mark. Whereas a decreasing trend of almost 5% is observed in manufacturing and tourism industry, hence contributing almost 15% and 20% respectively. Predictions show that finance industry will continue to boom in future and contribute almost 40% to Brazil’s economy, while the contribution from tourism sector will remain constant at around 25%. However a decreasing trend will be observed in food processing, manufacturing and oil and gas industry and their contributions to Brazil’s economy would be around 10%, 5% and 25% respectively.
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of Brazil over a period of 2009 to 2019 along with predictions for 2029.

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Finance
sector is showing an upward
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over a period of one decade and will continue the same
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in future
. Whereas the manufacturing sector has shown a downward
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when compared to past 10 years and will continue the declining
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in future
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like
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food
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processing
,
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Tourism
and
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oil
and
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gas
have shown a fluctuating trend.

In the year 2009
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finance
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industry
was the highest
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to Brazil’s
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with
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32%
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food
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was the least
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with roughly 10% contribution.

Manufacturing
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were the second lowest
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contributed
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economy
of Brazil.

Continuing with its increasing
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in 2019
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reached a mark of
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around
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of Brazil. Followed by it is the
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food
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processing
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industry
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and nearing a 20% mark.
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had a slight increase of 5% and touched
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will continue to boom in future and contribute
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, while the
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sector will remain constant at
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, manufacturing and
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gas
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industry
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economy
would be
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IELTS academic The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

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