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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. DOmj
The map indicates the changes of the village of Ryemouth in 1995 and present. Overall, as we take a look at the map, we see there are a number of differences between the years of 1995 and 2000. In 1995, there were a farmland on the North East corner of the map. Next to the farmland was forest park. There was a housing on the West side of the map. There were a hotel on the east side of the map and shops on the west side of the map. There were also fish market, cafe and a sea. Sea had fishing port in it. Present The map shows the farmland is no longer there. Thete is a golf area instead and tennis courts instead of the forest park. However, the housing is still there. The shops turned into restaurants. On the other hand the hotel is remaining. There is a car park added to the east side of the map. The fish market turned into apartment. However, the cafe has not changed. Finally, fishing port is no longer there. On the contrary, sea is still there.
The
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indicates the
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of the village of
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Ryemouth
in 1995 and present.

Overall
, as we take a look at the
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map
, we
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there are a number of differences between the years of 1995 and 2000.

In 1995, there were a farmland on the North East corner of the
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map
.
Next
to the farmland was forest park. There was a housing on the West side of the
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map
. There were a hotel on the east side of the
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map
and shops on the west side of the
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map
.
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There
were
also
fish market,
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cafe
and a sea. Sea had fishing port in it.

Present

The
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map
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shows
the farmland is no longer there.
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Thete
is a golf area
instead
and tennis courts
instead
of the forest park.
However
, the housing is
still
there. The shops turned into restaurants.
On the other hand
the hotel is remaining. There is a car park
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added
to the east side of the
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map
. The fish market turned into apartment.
However
, the
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cafe
has not
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changed
.
Finally
, fishing port is no longer there.
On the contrary
, sea is
still
there.
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IELTS academic The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

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4 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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