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Summarize the information about you gather from this graph and Make comparisons if possible. 7b13
The given poly line graph depicts the information about the count of three different electronic gadgets such as TV LCDs and LED which was sold in UK from 2006 to 2011 Overall it is lucid that with increasing number of year technology was also developedIn 2006, the sale of televisions was stood at 20 million and it was gradually include After two years the sale of Tvs was sharply soared and reached its zenith point at around 90 million units In 2008 electron gadget LCD was introduced soon after the introduction it was much more popular than others. Approximately 100 million units in the sale of LCDS in the United KingdomBy 2010, the count of LCD was sharply dwindled and reached its lowest point while the LCDs was introduced in the same year. The count of LCDs and Tvs was parallel and they were stood at approximately 40 million and 30 million respectively. The sale of LCDS was rockely increased and accounting for roughly 100 million in 2011
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line graph depicts the information about the count of three
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different
electronic gadgets such as TV
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LCDs
and LED which
was sold
in UK from 2006 to 2011
Overall
it is lucid that with increasing number of year technology was
also
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developedIn
2006, the
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sale
of televisions
was stood
at 20
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million
and it was
gradually
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include
After two years the
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sale
of
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Tvs
was
sharply
soared and reached its zenith point at around 90
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million
units In 2008 electron gadget LCD
was introduced
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soon
after the introduction it was much more popular than others. Approximately 100
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million
units in the
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sale
of
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LCDS
in the United
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KingdomBy
2010, the count of LCD was
sharply
dwindled and reached its lowest point while the
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LCDs
was introduced
in the same year. The count of
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LCDs
and
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Tvs
was
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parallel and
they
were stood
at approximately 40
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million
and 30
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million
respectively
. The
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sale
of
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LCDS
was
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rockely
increased and accounting for roughly 100
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million
in 2011
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