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The diagram below shows the difference stages involved in paper

The diagram below shows the difference stages involved in paper 23Yw
The diagram illustrates the process of making paper. Overall, it is clear that there are 7 distinct stages in the paper making process, beginning with cutting down the into timber and ending with the paper making. At the first stage, the tree is cutting down into timber and transported to the Debarking through the Crane. In which, the process of removing bark from wood. At the next stage, these timbers are traverse to Chipping Machine after completing of chipping, then this chips of timber pass through Mechanical Pulping process, and then go through to Chemical Pulping process, next to Hdrapulper. At the final stage, these materials send to the Paper making Machine after completing the Screening and cleaning.
The diagram illustrates the
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of making paper.
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, it is
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that there are 7 distinct
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stages
in the paper making
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process
, beginning with cutting down the into
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timber
and ending with the paper making.

At the
first
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stage
, the tree is cutting down into
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timber
and transported to the Debarking through the Crane. In which, the
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process
of removing bark from wood.

At the
next
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stage
, these
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timbers
are traverse to Chipping Machine after completing of chipping, then this chips of
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timber
pass through Mechanical Pulping
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process
, and then go through to Chemical Pulping
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process
,
next
to
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Hdrapulper
.

At the final
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stage
, these materials
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send
to the Paper making Machine after completing the Screening and cleaning.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the difference stages involved in paper

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
118 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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