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The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now.

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. xa1G6
The map illustrates the town of Stromer where was developed from 1995 to at present. Overall, there is small number of the construction in the town of stromer by 1995. However, this location has been significantly changes in infrastructure, residences and facilities for over the period. In 1995, this town had a extensive of forests square, where are located at the west and the northeast of the town. Moreover, in the among of all the establishment, there was only a farmland, which was the biggest construction and it had three more a tiny building and only one roadway in the town of Stromer. Currently, this farmland have been reduced size and replaced the various of establishments, which are one house, 4 apartments, 3 shop and a countless roads. Additionally, there are airport, school, stores and building, which are constructed on the area that used to be the forest. Furthermore, infrastruction of the town has been modernised with the plenty of roads.
The map illustrates the
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Stromer
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from 1995 to at present.
Overall
, there is
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small
number of the construction in the
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stromer
by 1995.
However
, this location has been
significantly
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changes
in infrastructure, residences and facilities for over the period.

In 1995, this
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town
had
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a extensive of
forests square, where
are located
at the west and the northeast of the
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town
.
Moreover
, in the among of all the establishment, there was
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only
a farmland, which was the biggest construction and it had three
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more a tiny
building and
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only
one roadway in the
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Stromer
.

Currently
,
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this farmland have
been
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reduced
size and replaced
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the various of
establishments, which are one
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house
, 4 apartments, 3 shop and a countless
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roads
.
Additionally
, there are airport, school, stores and building, which
are constructed
on the area that
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used
to be the forest.
Furthermore
,
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infrastruction
of the
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has been
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modernised
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plenty
of roads.
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IELTS academic The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now.

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