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The map below shows the development of the town between the 1990 and present

The map below shows the development of the town between the 1990 and present 5kB0P

the rendered map diagrams illustrate how the town has developed this both maps comparing between 1990 and present day. Overall, it depicts in the past the town much not improve the infrastructure as compared to the present. First, in 1970, a park is allocated in the North-West direction and just below the park, there has a large space for car parking. Subsequently, an outdoor pool was held in the North-East Side. Moreover, in the centre of the town there was a small reception and just below that changing room was available. A tiny cafe was held on the top side of reception, lastly, the two tennis courts were seen in the South-East. On the other hand, these days, the town has been developed by infrastructure. The indoor pool does not change but previous tennis courts were replaced by a fitness centre in the southeast along with a changing room all expanded. Moreover, an old Park has been dissected and constructed a basketball court in the North-West, car parking also replaced by four Tennis fields, finally, reception and cafe have settled in old places, there have constructed the compound wall with the exemption of sports fields.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 rendered map diagrams illustrate how the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 has developed this both maps comparing between 1990 and present day. Overall
, it depicts in the past the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 much not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the infrastructure as compared to the present.

First
, in 1970, a park is allocated
 in the North-West direction and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 below the park, there has a large space for car parking. Subsequently
, an outdoor pool was held
 in the North-East Side. Moreover
, in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 there was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 reception and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 below that changing room was available. A tiny 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
was held
 on the top side of reception, lastly
, the two tennis courts were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the South-East.

On the other hand
, these days, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 has been developed
 by infrastructure. The indoor pool does not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 previous tennis courts were replaced
 by a fitness Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 in the southeast along with a changing room all expanded. Moreover
, an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 Park has been dissected
 and constructed a basketball court in the North-West, car parking also
 replaced by four Tennis fields, finally
, reception and 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 have settled in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 places, there have constructed the compound wall with the exemption of sports fields. 