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The map below shows the development of the town between the 1990 and present

The map below shows the development of the town between the 1990 and present 5kB0P
the rendered map diagrams illustrate how the town has developed this both maps comparing between 1990 and present day. Overall, it depicts in the past the town much not improve the infrastructure as compared to the present. First, in 1970, a park is allocated in the North-West direction and just below the park, there has a large space for car parking. Subsequently, an outdoor pool was held in the North-East Side. Moreover, in the centre of the town there was a small reception and just below that changing room was available. A tiny cafe was held on the top side of reception, lastly, the two tennis courts were seen in the South-East. On the other hand, these days, the town has been developed by infrastructure. The indoor pool does not change but previous tennis courts were replaced by a fitness centre in the southeast along with a changing room all expanded. Moreover, an old Park has been dissected and constructed a basketball court in the North-West, car parking also replaced by four Tennis fields, finally, reception and cafe have settled in old places, there have constructed the compound wall with the exemption of sports fields.
the
rendered map diagrams illustrate how the
town
has developed this both maps comparing between 1990 and present day.
Overall
, it depicts in the past the
town
much not
improve
the infrastructure as compared to the present.

First
, in 1970, a park
is allocated
in the North-West direction and
just
below the park, there has a large space for car parking.
Subsequently
, an outdoor pool
was held
in the North-East Side.
Moreover
, in the
centre
of the
town
there was a
small
reception and
just
below that changing room was available. A tiny
cafe
was held
on the top side of reception,
lastly
, the two tennis courts were
seen
in the South-East.

On the other hand
, these days, the
town
has
been developed
by infrastructure. The indoor pool does not
change
but
previous tennis courts
were replaced
by a fitness
centre
in the southeast along with a changing room all expanded.
Moreover
, an
old
Park has
been dissected
and constructed a basketball court in the North-West, car parking
also
replaced by four Tennis fields,
finally
, reception and
cafe
have settled in
old
places, there have constructed the compound wall with the exemption of sports fields.
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