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GET TOGETEHR WRITE A PARAGRAPH ON LIFE

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The two tables together give a snapshot of the reasons people choose to stop smoking and when they intend to give up. The main reason smokers give for stopping is for general health (71%), with financial considerations (31%) and the risk of smoking-related diseases (25%) being the next two most popular reasons. One fact to highlight from this table is that almost twice the percentage of heavy smokers cite present health problems as the reason compared to light smokers. According to the second table, the majority of smokers questioned (71%) intended to give up, with light smokers more inclined to stop (79%) than heavy smokers (60%). 35% of smokers said they were planning to give up within the next six months and only 12% said they were prepared to try within the following month. Although only 29% of smokers on average were unwilling to give up, heavy smokers were almo
The two tables together
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a snapshot of the
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smoking and when they intend to
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The main
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smokers
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for stopping is for general health (71%), with financial considerations (31%) and the
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of smoking-related diseases (25%) being the
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two most popular
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. One fact to highlight from this table is that almost twice the percentage of heavy smokers cite present health problems as the
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reason
compared to light smokers.

According to the second table, the majority of smokers questioned (71%) intended to
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give
up, with light smokers more inclined to
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stop
(79%) than heavy smokers (60%). 35% of smokers said they were planning to
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give
up within the
next
six months and
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12% said they
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to try within the following month. Although
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29% of smokers on average were unwilling to
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up, heavy smokers were
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IELTS academic GET TOGETEHR WRITE A PARAGRAPH ON LIFE

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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