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mrs stevenson the paralysed women

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Sorry, the wrong number is a drama Or play written by Lucille Fletcher. Mrs. Stevenson is a paralyzed woman. She always been on or bedside and served her. But that night her husband had been working late in his office and her maid had a night off. She had been trying to contact him for the last 45 minutes. Then She was nervous and ask the operator to try it for her. The receiver was picked up at the other end. She heard two men making plans to kill a woman and to take away the jewelry so that it would be like a simple robbery. She was impatient and called Chief Operator to trace the call. He denied and then She called the police. But the police refused because the clue was not enough. She was growing restlessly. She phoned a hospital to send a trained nurse to be with her because of her bad health condition. But that was not available. Then she grew more terrified and phoned the police. Just then George came in and he replied police that he was sorry because it was the wrong number

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wrong
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always been
 on or bedside and served her. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 that night her husband had been working late in his office and her maid had a night off. She had been trying to contact him for the last 45 minutes. Then She was nervous and ask the operator to try it for her. The receiver was picked
 up at the other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
. She heard two This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
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so
 that it would be like a simple robbery. She was impatient and called Chief Operator to trace the call. He denied and then She called the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdetectiveforcelaw enforcementman
police
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdetectiveforcelaw enforcementman
police
 refused This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the clue was not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
. She was growing restlessly
. She phoned a hospital to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 a trained nurse to be with her This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of her This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 health condition. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 that was not available. Then she grew more terrified and phoned the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdetectiveforcelaw enforcementman
police
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
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in and
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police
 that he was sorry This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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wrong
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