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The map below shows the changes of city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

The given two maps show how to go to the City Hospital between 2007 and 2010. Overall, it can be seen from the maps that there were huge changings in three years. For instance, public car park was instructed while bus station was developed. As we can see that new roundabouts were constructed while bus station developed, however car park for staff and public became only for staff but public car park was instructed on the northern east part of the map.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 two maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 how to go to the City Hospital between 2007 and 2010.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from the maps that there were huge Possible spelling mistake found.changinghangings
changings
 in three years. For instance
, public car park was instructed
 while bus station was developed
.

As we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that new roundabouts were constructed
 while bus station developed, however
 car park for staff and public became This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for Use a comma before ‘but’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).staff,
staff
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 public car park was instructed
 on the northern east part of the map. 