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The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph provides the information about annual expenditure of cell phone and residential phone services since 2001 to 2010 Overall, cell phone services are gradually taken off to the public on the contrary residential phones have a dramatic dip since 2001 to 2010. When it arrives to 2006 both cell phone and residential phone services had equal expenditure. To begin with cell phone services in the past ears usage of cell phone is replaced with residential phones consequently the charges of the cell phone is reduced whereas in residential phones charges are increasing. When it reaches to the middle ears the line graph cross each other owing to the fact that residential phone handed over to cell phone. It leads to the cell phone expenditure is rocket while residential phone expenditure become lower apparently the usage of residential phone become rare.
The line graph provides the information about annual
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and
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residential
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phone
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services
since 2001 to 2010
Overall
,
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cell
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phone
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services
are
gradually
taken off to the public
on the contrary
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residential
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phones
have a dramatic dip since 2001 to 2010. When it arrives to 2006 both
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cell
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phone
and
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residential
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phone
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services
had equal
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expenditure
. To
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begin
with
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cell
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phone
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services
in the past
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ears
usage of
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cell
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phone
is replaced
with
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residential
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phones
consequently
the charges of the
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cell
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phone
is
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reduced
whereas in
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residential
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phones
charges are increasing. When it reaches to the middle ears the line graph cross each other owing to the fact that
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residential
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phone
handed over to
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cell
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phone
. It leads to the
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cell
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phone
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expenditure
is rocket while
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residential
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phone
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expenditure
become lower
apparently
the usage of
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residential
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phone
become rare.

IELTS academic The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.

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