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The given two maps illustrate way access to a city hospital between in 2007 and 2010.

The given two maps illustrate way access to a city hospital between in 2007 and 2010. Overall, it is clear from the map that there is only car park, staff and public in city hospital in the given year while bus station and staff car park were built instead of the car park: staff and public there years later. In 2007, there is a car park for staff and public and bus stop is beside the city hospital. There are city road, ring road and hospital Rd in city hospital. There years lated, public car park was built in this area and instead of the car park: staff and public bus station and staff car park were built. Instead of the bus stop, roundabouts was built.
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between in 2007 and 2010.

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, it is
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clear
from the map that there is
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only
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car
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park
,
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staff
and
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public
in city
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hospital
in the
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year while bus station and
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staff
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car
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park
were built
instead
of the
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car
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park
:
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staff
and
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public
there years later.

In 2007, there is a
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car
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park
for
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staff
and
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public
and bus
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stop
is beside the city
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hospital
. There are city road, ring road and
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hospital
Rd in city hospital.

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public
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car
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park
was built
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instead
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car
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park
:
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staff
and
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public
bus station and
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staff
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car
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park
were built
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stop
, roundabouts
was built
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IELTS academic The given two maps illustrate way access to a city hospital between in 2007 and 2010.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
126 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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