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The map below shows the changes in an American town between 1954 and 2014.

The map illustrates how a town in America developed between 1954 and 2014. Over the period, the town went from having mainly residential and industrial areas to having mostly commercial unitn north west of the canal and housing south-east of the canal. It also added some amenities such as an airport and stadium In the north-east of the town, all of the factories were flattened to make way Tor a new airport and some buildings dedicated to commerce. The supermarket. In the centre of town some houses were demolished and commercial buildings were erected in their place, and this also occurred in the west, where a local supermarket was also knocked down in order to make way for yet more commercial buildings. The petrol station did not undergo any changes. The area south-east of the canal remained relatively unchanged, where all of the residential area remained the same, with the exception of the church being replaced by a sports arena.

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town
 in America developed between 1954 and 2014.

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town
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added
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some
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town
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all of the
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make
 way Tor a new airport and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 buildings dedicated to commerce. The supermarket. In the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
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town
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some
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houses
were demolished
 and commercial buildings were erected
 in their place, and this also
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 knocked down in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
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 more commercial buildings. The petrol station did not undergo any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
.

The area south-east of the canal remained relatively
 unchanged, where Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
 residential area remained the same, Consider using "except" or "except for"exceptexcept for
with the exception of
 the church being replaced
 by a sports arena. 