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the map below shows a part of an art gallery in 1950 and now.

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The maps give information about an art gallery in Australia in the year 1950 and at present. From the map, we can clearly see that, while the middle of the art gallery remained unchanged, both sides of the gallery expanded more places and changed the locations of some places. The top space of the art gallery was a rectangle courtyard, this yard then be developed into three small spaces, including: Children Art School, Australian Aboriginal Art and Australian Art. On the South of the gallery only focused on different types of art. In the center of the map, the sculpture and the entrance remained the same, while there is an expanded of Australian Aboriginal Art. The left side of the map only pay attention to the public places, such us: toilet and art exhibition.
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give information about an
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gallery
in Australia in the year 1950 and at present. From the
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, we can
clearly
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that, while the middle of the
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art
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gallery
remained unchanged, both sides of the
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gallery
expanded more places and
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changed
the locations of
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some
places. The top space of the
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art
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gallery
was a rectangle courtyard, this yard then
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into three
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small
spaces, including: Children
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Art
School, Australian Aboriginal
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Art
and Australian
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Art
. On the South of the
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gallery
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only
focused on
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different
types of
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art
. In the center of the
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map
, the sculpture and the entrance remained the same, while there is
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an expanded of
Australian Aboriginal
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Art
. The
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left
side of the
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only
pay attention to the public places, such us: toilet and
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art
exhibition.
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IELTS academic the map below shows a part of an art gallery in 1950 and now.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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