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The map below show the layout of Lakeside in 2000 and 2009

The map below show the layout of Lakeside in 2000 and 2009 Mrje9
The given map chart shows the development of the lake side in nine years from 2002 to 2009. After analyzing the whole map chart it is observed that they are used to be a lake in northeast direction that had been converted into pond in 2009 while the river holder the same place the residential area on the east side of the river was used to increase the land for industrial complex. That residential area in the northwest corner did not change till the later given year car park had replaced the garlic warehouse and cinema had been constructed at the location of art center the offices and University had been established by demolishing the old town worlds the school they did not faced any Replacement. Usual being centered walls constructed in the west side of river whereas then lived in 2000.
The
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given
map chart
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shows
the development of the lake side in nine years from 2002 to 2009.

After analyzing the whole map chart it
is observed
that they are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to be a lake in northeast direction that had
been converted
into pond in 2009 while the river holder the same place the residential area on the east side of the river was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to increase the land for industrial complex.

That residential area in the northwest corner did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
till the later
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
year car park had replaced the garlic warehouse and cinema had
been constructed
at the location of art center the offices and University had
been established
by demolishing the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
town worlds the school they did not
The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: "face"
faced
any Replacement. Usual
being centered
walls constructed in the west side of river whereas then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lived
in 2000.
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