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There are many things that are trending in my country

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‏There are many things that are trending in my country. In the past black coloured abayas were the usual, but now they have changed and there are many colourful abayas. Now Women in Saudi Arabia like to change the designs of their abayas and it’s becoming trendy. There are many abaya designs and each design depends on the designer, for example, some designers like to change the colour and some designers like to change the fabrics. All of the designers are trying to invent new ideas to attract costumers. I like all of designs of the abaya
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IELTS academic There are many things that are trending in my country

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1 paragraphs
96 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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