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The bar chart illustrates the figures for house prices in five major cities over a period of 12 years, making a comparison with that in 1989.

The bar chart illustrates the figures for house prices in five major cities over a period of 12 years, making a comparison with that in 1989. x8XXg
The bar chart illustrates the figures for house prices in five major cities over a period of 12 years, making a comparison with that in 1989. Overall, the average cost fell overall from 1990 to 1995. In contrast, between 1996 and 2002, this number increased mostly. Prices in London have changed the most, from lowest to highest. From 1990 to 1995, housing prices in Tokyo and London fell by approximately 7%. In New York City, the decline was only 5%. For Spain and Frankfurt, the average house price is 2% and 3%, respectively. In the second stage, with the exception of Frankfurt, which went down slightly by 1%, the average house price went up significantly. The appreciation of other cities ranged from 2% to 20%, with London experiencing the largest increment. Nevertheless, Tokyo's growth rate is still lower than the average house price in 1989.
The bar chart illustrates the figures for
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in five major cities over a period of 12 years, making a comparison with that in 1989.

Overall
, the
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cost fell
overall
from 1990 to 1995.
In contrast
, between 1996 and 2002, this number increased
mostly
.
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Prices
in London have
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the most, from lowest to highest.

From 1990 to 1995, housing
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in Tokyo and London fell by approximately 7%. In New York City, the decline was
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only
5%. For Spain and Frankfurt, the
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average
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house
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is 2% and 3%,
respectively
.

In the second stage,
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with the exception of
Frankfurt, which went down
slightly
by 1%, the
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average
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went up
significantly
. The appreciation of other cities ranged from 2% to 20%, with London experiencing the largest increment.
Nevertheless
, Tokyo's growth rate is
still
lower than the
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in 1989.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the figures for house prices in five major cities over a period of 12 years, making a comparison with that in 1989.

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