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The map below show the lakeside from 2000 to 2009

The map below show the lakeside from 2000 to 2009 8LYgl
The stated maps illustrate radical amendmemts in the infrastucture of lakeside over the span of nine years. It is vivid from first diagrame that in 2000 year, lakeside had a river running through it from south sidr to north direction. Three residential area were located to the north-west, south-west direction and at the south west corner respectively. In the heart of lakeside, there was a school. Along with river, art center and industrial complex were situated in the west part of lakeside and south -east side orderly. Opposite the old town, to the north side, there was a derelic warehouse. A lake near the old town was built to the west side. Switching to rest detail, diring year 2009, the school and residential area remained at the same place. However, art center and lake had been converted into cinema and pond accordingly. It is interesting seen, shopping center and car park were made in the place of resdential area and derelic warehouse. Old town was totally demolished and the offices and university had been erected at that place orderly. Moreover, the area of industrial complex had been extended towards the south- east direction. Overall, it is menifest that the area of lakeside underwent significant modification with the included sophisticated alterations namely shopping center, cinema, and car park in given time.
The stated maps illustrate radical
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amendmemts
in the
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infrastucture
of lakeside over the span of nine years.

It is vivid from
first
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diagrame
that in 2000 year, lakeside had a river running through it from south
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sidr
to north direction. Three residential
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area
were located
to the north-west, south-west direction and at the
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south west
corner
respectively
. In the heart of lakeside, there was a school. Along with river, art center and industrial complex
were situated
in the west part of lakeside and south -east side orderly. Opposite the
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old
town, to the north side, there was a
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derelic
warehouse. A lake near the
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old
town
was built
to the west side. Switching to rest detail,
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diring
year 2009, the school and residential
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area
remained at the same place.
However
, art center and lake had
been converted
into cinema and pond
accordingly
. It is interesting
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seen
, shopping center and car park
were made
in the place of
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resdential
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area
and
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derelic
warehouse.
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Old
town was
totally
demolished and the offices and university had
been erected
at that place orderly.
Moreover
, the
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area
of industrial complex had
been extended
towards the south- east direction.
Overall
, it is
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menifest
that the
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area
of lakeside underwent significant modification with the included sophisticated alterations
namely
shopping center, cinema, and car park in
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given
time.
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