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Percentage of irish students at one university who spoke an additional language

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The pie charts shows the number of Irish students who can speak an extra language to English between 2000 and 2010. Overall, what stands out from the bar charts is that the percentage of students who can speak spanish increased over the period while there was a drop in the number of students who can speak french. looking at the information, In 2000, one-third of the Irish students could speak Spanish, making it the highest percentage among six sectors. Then, the percentage of students who speak spanish increased by 5% from one-third to 35% in 2010. 15% of Irish students in 2000 can speak another language, making it two times lower than the number of students who can speak spanish. Next, there was a slight increase in the percentage of another language to 20% in 2010. Two other languages accounted for 10%, which made it the lowest proportion in 2000. After this, the percentage of students who can speak two other languages slightly rose to 15% in 2010. On the other hand, 20% of Irish students did not speak other languages in 2000. Following this, the proportion dropped by half to exactly 10% at the end of the period. The French language contributed the additional language to English at 15% in 2000. Next, the percentage dropped by 5% from 15% to 10%% in 2010. The number of students who speak only celtic remained stable throughout the period.
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