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the map below show the changes that occurred in the town of newport between 1980 and 2010

the map below show the changes that occurred in the town of newport between 1980 and 2010 265pb
the two maps show the shopping mall, southside, in its current form and its proposed expansion. overall, it is clear that the plan is to extend the centre and its car park into nearby green space to allow for more stores and a greater focus on fashion at the expense of eateries and space for activities. currently, southside mall consists of only a supermarket, department store, cinemas, a noodle shop and cafe with a children's play area and toilet facilities. to the east of the centre, therr is a golf course that backs onto park, while to the south, there is a fitness centre and a carpark opposite the mall entrance
the
two maps
show
the shopping mall,
southside
, in its
current
form and its proposed expansion.
overall
, it is
clear
that the plan is to extend the
centre
and its car park into nearby green space to
allow
for more stores and a greater focus on fashion at the expense of eateries and space for activities.
currently
,
southside
mall consists of
only
a supermarket, department store, cinemas, a noodle shop and
cafe
with a children's play area and toilet facilities.
to
the east of the
centre
,
therr
is a golf course that backs onto park, while to the south, there is a fitness
centre
and a
carpark
opposite the mall
entrance
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IELTS academic the map below show the changes that occurred in the town of newport between 1980 and 2010

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