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The line graph indicates the beverage consumption in Canada from 1990 to 2010 and the table indicated the dairy products sales in Canada in 2010 . Summarise the information and make comparison wherever necessary.

The line graph indicates the beverage consumption in Canada from 1990 to 2010 and the table indicated the dairy products sales in Canada in 2010. x02R1
The line graph illustrates the usage if milk and pepsi in Canada from 1990 to 2010 while the table gives information about the sales of dairy products in the year 2010. To begin with, the sales of milk was around 35 millions litres in 1990 and it steadily reduced down to 26 millions litres over a period of four years between 1995 and 2010. The sales of pepsi was only 26 millions litres but after 1990 it showed continuously increment in the sales from 1995 to 2010. Furthermore, the table gives a description of dairy products sales in Canada in 2010. The highest sales was of a Nesle with 25. 9 CAD $ Billions, other three dairy products had a sale of approximately 15 CAD $ Billions. The lowest was of Dean Foods with a deal of 10. 2 CAD $ Billions. As an overview, it can be stated that the consumption of pepsi increased from 1990 to 2010, than that of milk. On the other hand, the sales of Nesle was highest among all the other dairy products.
The line graph illustrates the usage if milk and
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pepsi
in Canada from 1990 to 2010 while the table gives information about the
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sales
of
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dairy
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products
in the year 2010. To
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begin
with, the
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sales
of milk was around 35 millions
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litres
in 1990 and it
steadily
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reduced
down to 26 millions
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litres
over a period of four years between 1995 and 2010. The
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sales
of
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pepsi
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was
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only
26 millions
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litres
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but
after 1990 it
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showed
continuously
increment in the
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sales
from 1995 to 2010.
Furthermore
, the table gives a description of
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dairy
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products
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sales
in Canada in 2010. The highest
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sales
was of a
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Nesle
with 25. 9 CAD $ Billions, other three
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dairy
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products
had a
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sale
of approximately 15 CAD $ Billions. The lowest was of Dean Foods with a deal of 10. 2 CAD $ Billions. As an overview, it can
be stated
that the consumption of
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pepsi
increased from 1990 to 2010, than that of milk.
On the other hand
, the
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of
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was highest among all the other
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dairy
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products
.

IELTS academic The line graph indicates the beverage consumption in Canada from 1990 to 2010 and the table indicated the dairy products sales in Canada in 2010.

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