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The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2015 to 2035.

The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2015 to 2035. WEm9q
The given table shows the production of grains in million metric tons between 2015 and 2020, and suggests forecasts from the year 2020 to 2035. Obviously, the highest volume of the production of grains belongs to wheat. However, rice cultivation is at the lowest level, and the production of barley and maize ranked second and third, respectively. In 2015, the wheat production was two-fold, compared with barely and about four-fold compared to the rice and maize cultivation. The wheat production yield will merely increase by 2035 in the amount of 110 million metric tons. Barley's production yield was 50 million metric tons in 2015 and rose from 2015 to 2020. It is predicted that the production of barely will be doubled by 2035. The maize cultivated about 34 million metric tons in 2015 and it increased by half of this unit in 2020. The figure for rice production from 2015 to 2020 shows a slight decrease. The production rate of maize and rice is predicted that will increase by around one million metric tons.
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metric tons between 2015 and 2020, and suggests forecasts from the year 2020 to 2035.

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, the highest volume of the
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production
of grains belongs to wheat.
However
,
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rice
cultivation is at the lowest level, and the
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production
of barley and maize ranked second and third,
respectively
.

In 2015, the wheat
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production
was two-fold, compared with
barely
and about four-fold compared to the
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rice
and maize cultivation. The wheat
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yield will
merely
increase by 2035 in the amount of 110
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million
metric tons. Barley's
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production
yield was 50
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million
metric tons in 2015 and rose from 2015 to 2020. It
is predicted
that the
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production
of
barely
will
be doubled
by 2035.

The maize cultivated about 34
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metric tons in 2015 and it increased by half of this unit in 2020. The figure for
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rice
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production
from 2015 to 2020
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a slight decrease.
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The
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rate of maize and
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is predicted
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metric tons.
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