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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the information regarding the design of the wave - energy machine and the location where it is located In the initial stage the wave energy machine is been divided into two separate working chambers. Which is the bottom chamber and the top chamber respectively. In the next stage wave's enter the bottom chamber from an big opening. Where the water levels begin to rise up. Subsequently the air flow passes through the right hand gap to enter the top chamber. After that there is a electricity generator which is connected to the chamber from out side. Which is use to supply the current towards the turbine. Nextly with the help of that air flow is transferred to the other side of the chamber from where it leaves the chamber. And also there is a opening on the top right hand and bottom left hand from where the fresh air gets in and out to cool down the turbine. There are two different installing locations available. One with the small waves low output costs less while on the other side large waves high output is more expensive to install Overall, the entire process of wave - energy machine consists of six stages beginning from waves entering the chamber and ending at releasing the remaining air. While the installation cost varies depending upon the location options.

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wave
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 energy machine and the location where it is located
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wave
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chambers
. Which is the bottom You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxapartmentroomcellbedroomcubicle
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 and the top You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxapartmentroomcellbedroomcubicle
chamber
respectively
. In the next
 stage wave's enter the bottom You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxapartmentroomcellbedroomcubicle
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begin
 to rise up. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Subsequently,
Subsequently
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air
 flow passes through the Did you mean the adjective "right-hand"?right-hand
right hand
 gap to enter the top You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxapartmentroomcellbedroomcubicle
chamber
. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
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a
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 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxapartmentroomcellbedroomcubicle
chamber
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out side
. “Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Which
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use to
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current
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Nextly
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 flow is transferred
 to the other side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxapartmentroomcellbedroomcubicle
chamber
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leaves
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. And also
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a
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left
 hand from where the fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 in and out to cool down the turbine. There are two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 installing locations available. One with the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
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waves
 low output costs less while on the other side large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrushstreamswellupsurgerashsurge
waves
 high output is more expensive to install Overall
, the entire process of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrushstreamswellupsurgerashsurge
wave
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-
 energy machine consists of six stages beginning from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrushstreamswellupsurgerashsurge
waves
 entering the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxapartmentroomcellbedroomcubicle
chamber
 and ending at releasing the remaining You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 the installation cost varies depending upon the location options. 