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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. A01w
The diagram illustrates the information regarding the design of the wave - energy machine and the location where it is located In the initial stage the wave energy machine is been divided into two separate working chambers. Which is the bottom chamber and the top chamber respectively. In the next stage wave's enter the bottom chamber from an big opening. Where the water levels begin to rise up. Subsequently the air flow passes through the right hand gap to enter the top chamber. After that there is a electricity generator which is connected to the chamber from out side. Which is use to supply the current towards the turbine. Nextly with the help of that air flow is transferred to the other side of the chamber from where it leaves the chamber. And also there is a opening on the top right hand and bottom left hand from where the fresh air gets in and out to cool down the turbine. There are two different installing locations available. One with the small waves low output costs less while on the other side large waves high output is more expensive to install Overall, the entire process of wave - energy machine consists of six stages beginning from waves entering the chamber and ending at releasing the remaining air. While the installation cost varies depending upon the location options.
The diagram illustrates the information regarding the design of the
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energy machine and the location where it
is located
In the initial stage the
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wave
energy machine
is been
divided into two separate working
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chambers
. Which is the bottom
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chamber
and the top
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chamber
respectively
. In the
next
stage wave's enter the bottom
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chamber
from
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an
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big
opening.
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Where
the water levels
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begin
to rise up.
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Subsequently
the
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air
flow passes through the
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right hand
gap to enter the top
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chamber
.
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After
that there is
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a
electricity generator which
is connected
to the
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chamber
from
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out side
.
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Which
is
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use to
supply the
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current
towards the turbine.
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Nextly
with the
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help
of that
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air
flow
is transferred
to the other side of the
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chamber
from where it
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leaves
the
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chamber
. And
also
there is
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a
opening on the top right hand and bottom
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left
hand from where the fresh
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air
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gets
in and out to cool down the turbine. There are two
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different
installing locations available. One with the
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small
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waves
low output costs less while on the other side large
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waves
high output is more expensive to install
Overall
, the entire process of
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wave
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energy machine consists of six stages beginning from
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waves
entering the
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chamber
and ending at releasing the remaining
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air
.
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While
the installation cost varies depending upon the location options.
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