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Spending on research on renewable source of energy in four different countries.

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The line graph compares the dollars a single person spend for research in renewable source of energy by four different countries like UK, Spain Denmark and Switzerland fro1975 to 2000. Overall, it is clear that in Spain an individual was estimated to spend about 5 dollars towards research activity at the end of the period as well as in the case of Denmark which slightly lesser than 4 dollars. However the other two countries a single person was plotted to contribute only around a dollar towards advanced studies by the year 2000. In detail, initially all the countries started from a null point and after 5 years Denmark Switzerland and UK inhabitants managed to allot a dollar towards research while, Spain populations took initiative to give up 2 dollar. In the following years Spain peak up the track by increasing the amount acquired for research activity by 5 times higher than those of other countries in the year 2000. After 1980, Denmark and Spain citizens allocated less than a dollar for analyzing studies through out the end of the time period with least significant contributions. By contrast, Denmark came up from baseline and maintained a steady pace for almost 10 years till 1990 I, e. more than a dollar and then picks up an inclined trend which then attains a second position at the end of the time frame.
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IELTS academic Spending on research on renewable source of energy in four different countries.

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